English Speaking Lesson with Ringle Tutor
1) Original
I have heard the news about this topic, but, to be honest with you, I don’t know much about neither, so maybe I just thought I could be learn about this topic using Ringle, so that’s why you chose this topic. I didn’t know about the Terra and Luna and, what is that, and these very notorious happenings.
1) Paraphrase
I have heard about this topic in the news, but, to be honest with you, I don’t know much about it either. I thought I could learn about this topic using Ringle, so that’s why I chose it. I didn’t know much about Terra and Luna and its controversies.
2) Original
Actually, I couldn’t get the mechanism for how they do that, so I searched that in Korean language, and I got a little bit picture about the mechanism.
2) Paraphrase
I didn’t understand the mechanism behind the currency, and I wanted to know more about its features, so I searched for some information in Korean, and I have begun understanding a bit.
2) Tutor’s feedback
To begin, I removed the word “actually,” since it is used to show contradictions, and you didn’t really have a contradiction here. Next, the word “get” is often used as a synonym for “understand,” but, since “get” has several other meanings, I used “understand” to avoid ambiguity. Finally, the clause “I got a little bit picture” is not very common, so I instead used “I have begun understanding a bit.”
Using “get the picture” with very technical or academic subjects sounds odd.
3) Original
Of course, I think legislation needs to the…even in the cryptocurrencies, so I am doubt if many private companies…several companies can issue the…create the coins, and people might think, might not, “I could also create the currency”, you know, create the coins,
3) Paraphrase
Of course, I think crypto(currency) should be regulated by legislation because this technology might become widely used by both private companies, and individuals. For example, both of these groups have realized that they can create their own coins.
