English Speaking Lesson with Ringle Tutor
Rephrasing
Original
I could say Gregor had lot of pressure. Even though he transformed into a large insect he kept worrying about being related to his work. So I could see he had quite pressure on the job. But in society, in my opinion, we need to decide which we put more value on money or time. So if someone thinks time is more important then money and then they will value more than work. Their private life is more important than their job. Of course sometimes someone just can luckily get a job which he or she can enjoy it. That is the best option for everyone, but more of us we don’t have the fancy job. So I think that job is very important for the living cost. So I think it depends on our situation and in my case actually the main bread winner actually in my family is my husband and he is doing well until now so I really grateful so I can value on my time then money. So these days I focused on my son’s education. My husband think it is better than I get a full-time job because this year is really important for my family.
Correction
I think that Gregor still faces many pressures in his life. Despite being turned into a large insect, he still worries about his work, so it is clear that he feels very pressured in his job. When thinking about how this relates to society, I think that people tend to put more pressure on money than time. As a result, they are more likely to spend their lives working as opposed to cherishing their time with their loved ones. However, I do see how where you place the most value can depend on your personal circumstances. I feel fortunate that my husband is the bread-winner in the family, leaving me with more time to do things that I love or focus on other important parts of our life, like helping my son prepare for his high school entrance exams.
