Topic : Digital Privacy Matters
Rephrase
Before Correction
So we need to decide very carefully because actually it is not necessary when we use some services or products. But sometimes it provides quite worth tailored advertisements that might improve our lives a lot.
Repharased
We need to decide very carefully because it’s not necessary to use services or products where personal information is tracked, but sometimes it is. For example, providing my personal information sometimes leads to quite worthy and tailored advertisements that can improve my lives.
Before Correction
And actually I know the data cannot identify my personal identity and my location because it’s just to show the vague information, the ambiguous.
Modified
Google tracks shopping preferences in aggregate, meaning it knows a pool of anonymous users who like handbags.
Vocabulary
- vague information
general information; anonymous information; ambiguous; information that’s collapsed across users; information in aggregate - anonymous
(of a person) not identified by name; of unknown name - ambiguous
not clear or decided. - collapse
fold or be foldable - aggregate
pooled anonymous information; aggregate doesn’t identify individual users
