Ringle Review – Passion and Talent

Rephrasing

1) Original

Actually when I saw this question, I was a little bit confusing. (Frequent mistakes)

1) Correction

①Actually, when I saw this question, I found it confusing.
②When I saw this question, I felt confused.
③When I saw this question, I found myself experiencing mixed emotions.

2) Original

… because I couldn’t find it easily, you know, the field which I am good at having with my passion.

2) Correction

①…because I think that it is very difficult to find something that I am both passionate about and good at.
②The reason is that it can be hard to find something that one is both passionate about and good at.
③We might be passionate about something that we are not good at.

3) How to Connect Sentences

Actually, when I saw this question, I found it confusing. The reason that it can be hard to find something that one is both passionate about and good at. For example, I might really enjoy having discussions, even though my views are not always easily understood by others. However, since I am passionate about it, I know I will improve over time until I am good at it too.

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