English Speaking Lesson with Ringle Tutor
1) Original
Telsa launched the robot taxi service in Austin Texas, the service is about the autonomous vehicle. So passengers can use the taxi without human beings controlling the vehicle.
Paraphrase
The article is about a new robotaxi service in Austin, Texas. This service means that people can use taxis without human drivers.
#Refined Expressions (Tutor’s Version)
①Telsa launched the robot taxi service in Austin Texas, the service is about the autonomous vehicle.
Two independent clauses are joined with just a comma. This is grammatically incorrect in English. You need a period, semicolon, or conjunction.
②the service is about the autonomous vehicle.
In English, we usually say what something is rather than what it’s “about.”
2) Original
So influencers showing some videos showing the travels to local spots like bars and restaurants
Paraphrase
Influencers film their rides to local spots, in order to drum up hype.
#Refined Expressions (Tutor’s Version)
①film = take some videos of their rides
②drum up hype = to create conversation around a service, to get people talking, to spread the word
3) Original
I think the technology provides the a service that makes people quite satisfy satisfied. The technology needs to make ensure the safety to of the passengers.
Paraphrase
As long as safety concerns are addressed, I think people will be very satisfied with this technology.
#Refined Expressions (Tutor’s Version)
①address (verb) = to deal with or focus on a problem or issue
