Speaking Lesson with Ringle Tutor
Rephrasing
1) Original
In the article, the sleep aid market is getting bigger, so there are several types of sleeping aids goods, such as over-the-counter medicines or electronic devices.
Correction
In the article, it is mentioned that the sleep aid market is expanding, leading to the availability of various types of sleep aids, including over-the-counter medicines and electronic devices.
“Expanding” is used instead of “getting bigger” because it’s more concise and is a more advanced vocabulary word. You can also use the word “growing”.
“Over-the-counter” means medications that can be purchased without a prescription
2)Original
The article said that the industry about the sleep aid market will have a brighter future.
Correction
The article suggests that the sleep aid market industry will have a promising future.
“Promising future” is a more idiomatic and optimistic way to express the idea that the industry will have a bright future. We use “bright future” usually to describe accomplishments (people, companies, etc.).
3)Original
I didn’t take my medicine, but after that, I had experienced a lot of pains about that, especially when my eyes had some sticky fluid.
Correction
I didn’t take my medicine, and afterward, I suffered from a lot of discomfort, especially when my eyes produced sticky fluid.
“Suffered from a lot of discomfort” is a cleaner and more natural way to say “experienced a lot of pains about that,” describing physical distress or pain.
