English Speaking Lesson with Ringle Tutor
1) Original
I think that after I step into the society, I had more complex issues, such as deciding to purchase the house with mortgage.
Paraphrase
After stepping into adult life, I started having to deal with more complex issues such as deciding to purchase a house and get a mortgage.
#Refined Expressions (Tutor’s Version)
①have issues = You have several kinds of personal issues(health, financial problems)
②dealing with issues = you need to make difficult decisions
2) Original
But the problem was that at the moment my son was first grade in elementary schools.
And after that even though I really enjoyed my work and I really didn’t want to lose my career but finally I decided to support my son.
Paraphrase
However, at the time my son was in first grade, and although I loved my work and didn’t want to give up my career, I was quite torn about how to dedicate my time.
#Refined Expressions (Tutor’s Version)
①torn = undecided, confused between two options
3) Original
At the time, I thought a lot eagerly but I finally I had to build my family foundation and I believe that my family bond and foundation would protect our happiness. So, yeah, that was so difficult decision.
Paraphrase
At the time, I contemplated the decision a lot. But at the end of the day, I decided to invest in my family bond and build a strong family foundation, as I believed this would best serve all our interests.
#Refined Expressions (Tutor’s Version)
①contemplate = think about something very deeply (especially a decision)
②serve an interest = to benefit something
